hi
i'm toying with the idea of throwing in more and more saves the day references into the "last place" rewrite. i was at the gym today and after running for 20 minutes trying to lose all of my baby fat i was walkin' and listening to a piece of art; "lisa's birthday tape."
here's the story:
lisa was a girl who loved saves the day. she wanted the mto play her party so chris conley- the lead singer- was going to go to an acosutic set at her party BUT it was at the end of a tour and he couldn't make it so he recorded her a tape for her birthday of five songs he wrote all in one night for her. making saves the day greatness. the "in reverie" before "in reverie"
but here's my idea. i'll post notes of it maybe- maybe not. i was listening to it and thinking- huh. lisa. e-lisa. lisa's birthday tape. elisa's birthday tape. elisa's birthday's in november... so here's my amazing idea! should i put in an "elisa's birthday tape" made by a mystery person in "last place" and have her figure out it's a certain someone on a certain night?
which sadly means the talent show idea is out- which is sort of unrealistic and cheesy altogether.
so what do you think?
jaseyray.
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i read the tape part first. and i dunno. i like the talent show and the tape both. but i agree, having them both would be kind of cheesy.
but actually, i think the tape is a good choice. its more original. and yeah, it gives us a, "DOH! ELISA. BENNETT GAVE YOU THAT." feeling. haha.
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