"direction" the starting line

hi

what do you think of the direction added to the story in "last place"?

i was thinking about changing something real quick too. i might change it so cass isn't in elisa's english class anymore... would that be too weird? i think i have cass flunk out of their english class or something making it more smooth and stuff because what i have planned is going to make cass look a little... idiotic? perhaps?

i don't know. i need to write it out a little.

i also might go back into "all we ever needed" because i hit a brick wall there and change the end of the last chapter. thoughts?

jaseyray