Thursday, August 13, 2009

"this is not an exit" saves the day

hi

so i got one of them ost honest meaningful reviews in my lifetime as a fanfiction.net writer. i love it so much. it wasn't a corny one it was a get-off-your-ass-and-write-us-new-stuff-to-read-you-are-going-to-end-up-like-the-tool-shits-that-rewrite-their-stories-a-hundred-times.

so you're probably all expecting me to post a cheesy love story about jonah. it was suggested but no. i have a better idea. i'm taking all my stories that are going nowhere off of the air. what stories? "leaving through the window" is coming down for now. but "all we ever needed" has potential. i'm diving into that soon too. but here is where you sigh and say... not again.

i'm not saying a word. it will remain a secret. A SECRET. ajsdfkljdksdkfjsdfjklklsdfjsdjkljklsdfjklsdfjkfsdjklsdfjklsdf i love it. so much. be excited.

jaseyray

***Edit: I've officially logged off of FanFiction for now. Bebacksoon. Getting into character.

3 comments:

never-explore said...

aha, yeah. i read that. and i'll be honest and say that i wanted to say the same but i didnt want to be mean. i guess you can say im not a very honest person. i am a person with many secrets. im sorry.

but lol. a love story for jonah. im sorry but i cant really picture that for jonah as much as i want me to be jonah's girl. baha. hes too crazy. i would expect him to jump girls than to be all cheesy love with them.

but aww, you're taking 'leaving through the window' down? i really wanted that to continue. but i cant wait to read more 'all we ever needed' though. wee.

AND MORE SECRETS.
SIGH. SIGH. i said it twice. buha.
and ... NOT AGAIN.

welll, i cant wait for it to be revealed. the excitement is killing me.

you're killing me.

Jasey Ray said...

"aha, yeah. i read that. and i'll be honest and say that i wanted to say the same but i didnt want to be mean. i guess you can say im not a very honest person. i am a person with many secrets. im sorry. "

what were you going ot say? i have thick skin go for it and say it

never-explore said...

like the same thing that that girl said. that rewriting the stories over again gets boring. but dont get me wrong, i still love reading them. but i'd like to read other stuff too. the sad thing is that i can only read YOUR stuff. if your story were a person and we were in a relationship then they'd probably break up with me for being too clingy haha. but i mean, in your rewrites. you add more twists and plots and all those crazy shizz you hide under you sleeve and i dont get bored easily.

okay, okay. i love your stuff. the end. i really dont care if you rewrite them 923109382 times. just as long you add suprises.

you also seriously need to get them published so i can use them for book reports and projects. haha. i used your stories on my reading log last year. xD

gah. okay. im not really good at constructive criticism. i more into praising people and making them happy. cause i love making people happy and seeing them smile. i love people. even though i usually say i hate them. i hate some people. i love the nice people.

haha, yeah.
im a hippie.

peace.